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- What purple prose is<\/li>\n
- Where the term comes from<\/li>\n
- Examples of purple prose<\/li>\n
- When purple prose IS appropriate<\/li>\n
- How to remove purple prose from your writing<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<\/div>\n\n\n\n
Table of contents<\/h2>
- What is Purple Prose?<\/a>
- Why Purple Though? The Origins<\/a><\/li>
- Other Colors of Prose<\/a><\/li><\/ul><\/li>
- Why You Should Avoid Purple Prose<\/a>
- 1. It\u2019s Distracting<\/a><\/li>
- 2. It Makes the Reader Feel Uneducated<\/a><\/li>
- 3. It Makes the Author Look Conceited<\/a><\/li><\/ul><\/li>
- Examples of Purple Prose<\/a><\/li>
- Times When You Should Use Purple Prose<\/a>
- 1. For Comic Effect<\/a><\/li>
- 2. For Certain Genres<\/a><\/li>
- 3. For Dramatic Effect<\/a><\/li><\/ul><\/li>
- How to Remove Purple Prose<\/a>
- 1. Write in Your Own Voice<\/a><\/li>
- 2. Only Say What Needs to Be Said<\/a><\/li>
- 3. Don\u2019t Over-Rely on the Thesaurus<\/a><\/li>
- 4. Use the Hemingway App<\/a><\/li><\/ul><\/li>
- Final Thoughts on Purple Prose<\/a><\/li><\/ul><\/div>\n\n\n\n
What is Purple Prose?<\/h2>\n\n\n\n
Purple prose refers to writing that is excessively ornate, flowery, or grandiloquent. It typically uses exaggerated, elaborate, or pretentious language and descriptions, often to the point of being overdone, artificial, ridiculous, and disruptive to the narrative flow.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
Purple prose often features long, convoluted sentences with a lot of adjectives and adverbs, and an abundance of metaphors and similes that can make the text hard to follow and understand. <\/p>\n\n\n\n
It tends to prioritize style over substance, and can distract from the main point or message of the writing.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
The term “purple” in “purple prose” refers to the use of excessive, overblown, and flowery language that can make the writing seem overly dramatic or even comical. <\/p>\n\n\n\n
While some writers a purple passage deliberately for stylistic or comedic effect, it is generally considered a sign of poor writing and is best avoided<\/a> in most cases.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
Why Purple Though? The Origins<\/h3>\n\n\n\n
The term \u201cPurple Prose\u201d is ultimately derived from the Roman poet Horace, who has a passage in lines 14-21 of his Ars Poetica<\/em> that goes like this:<\/p>\n\n\n\n
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Weighty openings and grand declarations often<\/p>\n\n\n\n
Have one or two purple patches tacked on<\/strong>, that gleam<\/p>\n\n\n\n
Far and wide, when Diana's grove and her altar,<\/p>\n\n\n\n
The winding stream hastening through lovely fields,<\/p>\n\n\n\n
Or the river Rhine, or the rainbow's being described.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
There's no place for them here. Perhaps you know how<\/p>\n\n\n\n
To draw a cypress tree: so what, if you've been given<\/p>\n\n\n\n
Money to paint a sailor plunging from a shipwreck<\/p>\n\n\n\n
In despair?<\/p>\n– Ars Poetica, Horace<\/cite><\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n
In the first part of that quote, Horace is essentially stating that any \u201cweighty openings and grand declarations\u201d have purple patches attached, or in other words, they are purple.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
What follows is, itself, a kind of purple prose, with great flowery descriptions and rambling text. Probably an attempt by Horace to emphasize his point.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
And that is why we now call it \u201cpurple\u201d prose.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
Other Colors of Prose<\/h3>\n\n\n\n
In addition to purple, there are two other \u201ccolors\u201d that are used to describe prose. Here is just a quick look at those two, and what sets them apart from purple prose:<\/p>\n\n\n\n
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- Beige Prose: <\/strong>“Beige prose” is a term that is sometimes used to describe writing that is technically correct and grammatically sound, but is considered bland, uninspiring, or lacking in creativity or personality. In many ways, it\u2019s the exact opposite of purple prose, but not in a good way.<\/li>\n\n\n\n
- Blue Prose: <\/strong>“Blue prose” is a term that is sometimes used to describe writing that is overly sexual or erotic in nature, often to the point of being gratuitous or vulgar.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n
All three of these different prose types are undesirable, and should largely be avoided.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
Why You Should Avoid Purple Prose<\/h2>\n\n\n\n
Here are three reasons why you should avoid purple prose whenever you can:<\/p>\n\n\n\n
1. It\u2019s Distracting<\/h3>\n\n\n\n
The worst part about purple prose is that it\u2019s distracting, it pulls the reader out of the text in a jarring way.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
The reason for this is because most of the time you want to be clear and concise in your writing. Get the meaning across to the reader as quickly and efficiently as possible.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
It\u2019s true that sometimes you might have a lot of information to convey to the reader, but in these situations, you want to use no more words than absolutely necessary to do so.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
Otherwise, you\u2019re just wasting space and the readers\u2019 time.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
2. It Makes the Reader Feel Uneducated<\/h3>\n\n\n\n
If you rely too heavily on large words and overly ornate text, it can elevate the reading-level of your text.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
Now this might not sound like a bad thing on the surface. But what happens when the reading-level is elevated, is those who enjoy a lower level of reading will feel stupid, like they are not smart enough to understand what you are saying.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
In reality, most read at a 3-5th-grade reading level. And while you certainly don\u2019t want to dumb down your writing, you also want to use clear and understandable language when writing for a general audience.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
3. It Makes the Author Look Conceited<\/h3>\n\n\n\n
Going along with the last point, authors who excessively rely on purple prose appear conceited to general audiences.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
This is because purple prose, while it might sound academic and educated, usually isn\u2019t. Instead, it often appears like more of an attempt on the author\u2019s part to appear more educated then they actually are.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
Readers might not articulate this, but purple prose can easily (and subconsciously) make them view the author as conceited and full of themselves.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
Examples of Purple Prose<\/h2>\n\n\n\n
In addition to some of the quotes I\u2019ve selected, scattered through this article, the following are some made up examples of what purple prose looks like:<\/p>\n\n\n\n
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- “The luminous moon hung in the inky black sky, casting its silver beams upon the shimmering waves that gently lapped against the shore.”<\/li>\n\n\n\n
- “Her eyes were like deep pools of sapphire, sparkling with the fire of a thousand suns.”<\/li>\n\n\n\n
- “The fragrant petals of the exquisite rose bloomed in a riot of colors, imbuing the air with their heady scent.”<\/li>\n\n\n\n
- “The majestic mountains towered above us, their snow-capped peaks piercing the azure heavens like titans of the earth.”<\/li>\n\n\n\n
- “The melodious voice of the nightingale filled the air, its sweet song echoing through the enchanted forest like a symphony of magic.”<\/li>\n\n\n\n
- “The ballroom was a dazzling spectacle of opulence and extravagance, with crystal chandeliers sparkling like diamonds overhead, and the guests arrayed in their finest silks and velvets, gliding across the polished floor like figures in a dream.”<\/li>\n\n\n\n
- “The garden was a riot of color and scent, with flowers of every hue and shape bursting forth from the lush foliage, their petals glistening with dew like drops of liquid gold.”<\/li>\n\n\n\n
- “The sky was ablaze with the fiery glow of the setting sun, casting a warm and comforting light over the landscape, while the birds sang their evening songs in a chorus of pure joy.”<\/li>\n\n\n\n
- “Her hair was a cascade of shimmering gold, framing her delicate features like a halo of light, while her eyes shone like emeralds in the moonlight, hinting at the secrets that lay hidden within.”<\/li>\n\n\n\n
- “The desert was a harsh and unforgiving place, with the scorching sun beating down relentlessly on the barren landscape, and the sand dunes shifting and changing like waves on an endless sea, as if mocking the frailty of mortal life.”<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\r\n
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Times When You Should Use Purple Prose<\/h2>\n\n\n\n
Now, despite everything I\u2019ve said so far, there are actual times when purple prose is allowed (and even sometimes necessary).<\/p>\n\n\n\n
1. For Comic Effect<\/h3>\n\n\n\n
One of the most obvious examples of using purple prose is for comedic effect. You'll see this happen with certain characters in film and television, characters who spout purple prose wherever they go. This is used to make the characters seem over the top and living in the clouds.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
Another master of purple prose in comedy is Douglas Adams. Here is an example of his use of purple prose in The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy:<\/p>\n\n\n\n
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“It was as if the universe had conspired to make everything in his life go wrong, like a cosmic version of Sod's Law. The stars were aligned against him, the planets had all gone retrograde, and even the dust motes seemed to be conspiring to make him sneeze.”<\/p>\n– The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy, Douglas Adams<\/cite><\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n
2. For Certain Genres<\/h3>\n\n\n\n
Additionally, there are certain genres where purple prose is more appropriate than in others. These genres can include the following:<\/p>\n\n\n\n
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- Literary works that are intentionally stylized or experimental in nature<\/li>\n\n\n\n
- Certain forms of poetry<\/li>\n\n\n\n
- Prose poetry<\/li>\n\n\n\n
- Magical realism<\/li>\n\n\n\n
- Gothic\/Romantic literature<\/li>\n\n\n\n
- Some types of fantasy and science fiction<\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n
While it is common to find purple prose in these genres, it should not make up the entire novel. Instead, it should be used sparingly within the novel under the right contexts.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
3. For Dramatic Effect<\/h3>\n\n\n\n
One of the most important ways that you can use purple prose is in specific dramatic scenes.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
Sometimes, in order to add emphasis to a particular moment, you should spend more to describing that moment. Doing so adds dramatic effect and allows you to control the pacing.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
Let's take a look at one of my favorite examples of purple prose from The Return of the King.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
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\u201cAnd far away, as Frodo put on the Ring and claimed it for his own, even in Sammath Naur the very heart of his realm, the power in Barad-d\u00far was shaken, and the Tower trembled from its foundations to its proud and bitter crown. The Dark Lord was suddenly aware of him, and his Eye piercing all shadows looked across the plain to the door of that he had made; and the magnitude of his own folly was revealed to him in a blinding flash, and all the devices of his enemies were at last laid bare. Then his wrath blazed in consuming flame, but his fear rose like a vast black smoke to choke him. For he knew his deadly peril and the thread upon which his doom was hung.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
\u201cFrom all his policies and webs of fear and treachery, from all his stratagems and wars his mind shook free; and throughout his realm a tremor ran, his slaves quailed, and his armies halted, and his captains suddenly steerless, bereft of will, wavered and despaired. For they were forgotten. The whole mind and purpose of the Power that wielded them was now bent with overwhelming force upon the Mountain. At his summons, wheeling with a rending cry, in a last desperate race there flew, faster than the winds, the Nazg\u00fals, the Ringwraiths, and with a storm of wings they hurtled southwards to Mount Doom…”<\/p>\n– Return of the King, J. R. R. Tolkien<\/cite><\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n
Even with all these examples, I would still caution you about overusing purple prose. A few moments here and there to establish tone or a particular comedic moment are fine, but if you use purple language throughout the entirety of your book, you are sabotaging your writing.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
How to Remove Purple Prose<\/h2>\n\n\n\n
Now that we understand why you shouldn't use purple prose, except in certain specific instances, let's discuss how you can remove purple prose from your writing, and avoid it in the future.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
1. Write in Your Own Voice<\/h3>\n\n\n\n
Most of us do not talk in purple prose. So use your own natural voice as an example. I might even recommend dictation as a way of getting your first draft done, because it will keep your voice sounding natural.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
Because let's face it, who is using ornate language or complex metaphors in daily speech?<\/p>\n\n\n\n
2. Only Say What Needs to Be Said<\/h3>\n\n\n\n
While it can be tempting to make a statement in the most complex way possible, a sign of good writing is the opposite: someone who is able to get meaning across in as few words as possible.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
In fiction, you want to avoid unnecessary descriptions or digressions that do not serve the plot or character development<\/a>. You need to be selective about the details you choose to include, and focus only on what is essential to your story or argument.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
3. Don\u2019t Over-Rely on the Thesaurus<\/h3>\n\n\n\n
While it can be tempting to use a thesaurus to find fancier words to replace simpler ones, this can often lead to purple prose. Instead, focus on a word choice that is clear and straightforward, and that accurately conveys your intended meaning. <\/p>\n\n\n\n
Remember that sometimes, simple is better.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
4. Use the Hemingway App<\/h3>\n\n\n\n
Finally, consider using a tool like the Hemingway App<\/a> to help you identify and eliminate purple prose in your writing. <\/p>\n\n\n\n
This app analyzes your writing for readability and identifies areas where you can simplify or clarify your language. <\/p>\n\n\n\n
- Blue Prose: <\/strong>“Blue prose” is a term that is sometimes used to describe writing that is overly sexual or erotic in nature, often to the point of being gratuitous or vulgar.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n
- 2. Only Say What Needs to Be Said<\/a><\/li>
- 2. For Certain Genres<\/a><\/li>
- 2. It Makes the Reader Feel Uneducated<\/a><\/li>
- Other Colors of Prose<\/a><\/li><\/ul><\/li>
- Why Purple Though? The Origins<\/a><\/li>
- What is Purple Prose?<\/a>